Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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is changed
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the limit of interaction level between
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. Alteration of communication through
technology
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also
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affects types of
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. It is true that there are both positive and negative
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of
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alteration. In my opinion,
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the negative
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are overweight
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positive
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about
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dramatic
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of
technology
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on human communication and relationship.
Firstly
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, social
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and dating
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are developed with
techonogy
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technology
which are giving
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for
people
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to talk with strangers,
even
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and even
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dating
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. There are so many friendship and dating options available, thanks to social
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.
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,
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people
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should make friends
with
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step by step.
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Also
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people
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don't hesitate to listen
each
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other on
socail
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social
media
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which has
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impact on
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conversation. Listening is different from hearing and the concept of communication should contain both
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the
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actions.
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, dating
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are changing the meaning of relationships. Normally,
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need
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time for understanding their
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expectations
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, realities and hobbies, but these
websites
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demolishing the fundamental barrier between these understandings.
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,
people
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can't stand each
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physical appearance or behaviours. Before the internet, a man and a woman dating with each other in
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bistro's
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or
restaurants
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restaurant
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, but
knowadays
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nowadays
these platforms changed into mobile phone applications
such
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as
Imessage
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iMessage
, WhatsApp or Tinder. In conclusion, with technological development, the way of
interaction
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interacting
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through
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different
people
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is changed and developed into a different concept. In my point of view, social
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and dating
websites
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have a poor impact on human relationships.
People
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should consider their different alternatives for dealing with
technology
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual relationships
  • social media
  • messaging apps
  • online dating platforms
  • remote work
  • global collaboration
  • family dynamics
  • constant contact
  • in-person interaction
  • physical presence
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