The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.
The given graph illustrates the proportion of
population
and wealth
distribution
in a certain number of areas in the world.
Looking at an overall
perspective, it seems evident that North America has the most significant contribution to global prosperity although
its population
is the second lowest. However
, an opposite figure can be seen in India.
Regarding the chart, although
the population
of North America is not considerable, at only 5%, its contribution to wealth
is the greatest, at approximately 35%. In contrast
, India and Africa have the smallest distribution
, at 2 per cent whereas
their proportion of the population
is 15 and 10% respectively. In addition
, the percentage of the two categories in Latin America is similar, with around 5 per cent for the population
and 2% lower than that for wealth
.
Turning to the other regions, there are 15% of the population
in Europe, much smaller than the figure for wealth
distribution
, at 30%, the second highest among the 8 areas. This
is followed by Rich Asia Pacific, with nearly 25% for wealth
and 20% lower than that
the percentage of dwellers. China has the highest Correct word choice
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population
, at 25% while
its global wealth
is less than 5%. Lastly
, the proportion of wealth
distribution
in the other Asia Pacific is similar to China, its population
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