Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its content and say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear sir and madam, I am Celine Chan. I was on a flight to London

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week and I think I might leave one of my hand-carry luggage on the plane. My flight number was TX128 and the plane departed from Tokyo on the 1st of July and arrived

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on the 2nd of July. My seat number was 37A. The luggage is in blue colour and you can find many stickers on it. Regarding its content, you may find a new baby toy set that I prepared for my baby niece,who was just born

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week,inside the luggage. Please contact me on my phone on 61234567 no matter if you can find it or not. I am now staying in the Prince Hotel which is located in the city centre of London and I would be grateful if you can send my bag directly to my hotel once you find my bag. I am more than willing to pay the delivery fee as long as I can get back the present. Thank you for your help. Yours faithfully, Celine Chan

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6 paragraphs

181 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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