Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its content and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear sir and madam, I am Celine Chan. I was on a flight to London
last
week and I think I might leave one of my hand-carry luggage on the plane. My flight number was TX128 and the plane departed from Tokyo on the 1st of July and arrived
London
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on the 2nd of July. My seat number was 37A. The luggage is in blue colour and you can find many stickers on it. Regarding its content, you may find a new baby toy set that I prepared for my baby niece,who was just born
last
week,inside the luggage. Please contact me on my phone on 61234567 no matter if you can find it or not. I am now staying in the Prince Hotel which is located in the city centre of London and I would be grateful if you can send my bag directly to my hotel once you find my bag. I am more than willing to pay the delivery fee as long as I can get back the present. Thank you for your help. Yours faithfully, Celine Chan
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