The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
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takeaways
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Canada
while
the given bar chart illustrates how many Indian
restaurants located
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were located
canada
over a period of Change the capitalization
Canada
fifty five
years from 1960 to 2015.
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Overall
, it can clearly be seen that Chinese and Indian
takeaways
are the favourite
and the number of Fix the agreement mistake
favourites
Indian
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an Indian
the Indian
restaurant
in Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
Canada
rose significantly and then
remainly
unchanged over the period given.
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remained
remain
remaining
Firstly
, Chinese and Indian
takeaways
accounted for 60% of all takeout, which are
34% and 26% respectively. Chinese contributed Change the verb form
is
one third
of the total number Add a hyphen
one-third
favourite
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of favourite
takeaways
. Secondly
, the rest are Italian at 10%, Persian
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and Persian
9
%. Mexican, Japanese, Greek and Thai were only 1%.
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On the other hand
, the number of Indian
restaurants located in Canada
started around
500. It Change preposition
at around
then
rose dramatically over a period of 47 years. It then
reached a peak of around 9000 in 2007 and stayed relatively unchanged just
over 9000 in the following eight years.Change preposition
at just
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