The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Run down to Corbie
Road
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

straight, there's one supermarket. From
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

map, McGoldrick
Road
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

is straight
downward
Replace the word
down

The word downward doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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to
south
Correct article usage
the south

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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. Straight down to McGoldrick
Road
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

and turn right to
first
Add an article
the first

The noun phrase first block seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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block, there's
car
Correct article usage
a car

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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Park for houses.
further
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

down to McGoldrick
Road
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

on
Right
Correct article usage
the Right

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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side
Add a comma
,side

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase further down to McGoldrick Road on Right side. Consider adding a comma.

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there's
public
Correct article usage
a public

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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Park
Fix capitalization
park

Park does not appear to be a proper noun. Consider lowercasing it.

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.
Sports
Add an article
The sports

The noun phrase Sports center seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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center
Change the spelling
centre

The spelling of center is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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is located in
East
Correct article usage
the East

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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corner of
map
Add an article
the map

The noun phrase map seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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