The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Run down to Corbie
Road
straight, there's one supermarket.
From this
map, McGoldrick Road
is straight downward
to Replace the word
down
south
. Straight down to McGoldrick Correct article usage
the south
Road
and turn right to first
block, there's Add an article
the first
car
Park for houses. Correct article usage
a car
further
down to McGoldrick Road
on Right
Correct article usage
the Right
side
there's Add a comma
,side
public
Correct article usage
a public
Park
. Fix capitalization
park
Sports
Add an article
The sports
center
is located in Change the spelling
centre
East
corner of Correct article usage
the East
map
.Add an article
the map
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