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Variety of exams are being conducted to examine the eligibility of students for centuries. What are its causes and solutions?

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There are some ways to understand
students
' eligibility. One of the oldest methods is examining. Over centuries,
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different variations of
exams
 are applied to
students
 to define their levels in many subjects.
This
 essay will discuss the main causes and possible solutions for it. The 2 main causes are "restriction of learning limits" and "increase in
anxiety
 prevalence" among
students
. It is true that
,
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exams
 are restricting pupils learning capacity in a certain topic. Most
exams
 contain only certain lectures which are determined before the exam and
students
 study on these lectures only.
For example
, if pupils are responsible for 1-8 units of their textbooks, the lecturer can't expect them to know unit 9. Learning is a different perspective on life and
students
 purge stress from their life for a healthy learning process.
On the other hand
, it isn't possible with
exams
.
According to
 recent research,
exams
are
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, it doesn't matter which of them, significantly increase the
anxiety
 level of
students
. 4 of 5 randomized-controlled studies confirm
this
 hypothesis.
In contrast
, there are many different ways to evaluate the eligibility of
students
 and one of them could be a solution for pupils. Evaluation of
the
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long-term performance can
also
 determine the effort of someone.
Moreover
, giving a chance to the long-term performance evaluation could decrease the level of
anxiety
 of
students
. Cancelling
exams
 can
also
 improve the capacity
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 over time,
also
 indirectly reduce the stress level of
students
.
To conclude
, different types of
exams
 are conducted by lecturers to understand their eligibility in a certain topic.
Exams
 restrict
the
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learning capacity and bring
anxiety
 to
students
. It is hard to believe that there are different ways to evaluate people and evaluation of performance could be a great solution to
this
 problem.
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