The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph illustrates the percentage of four different goods,
paper
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and
cardboard
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, glass containers, aluminium cans, and plastics, that experienced recycling between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
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,
paper
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and
cardboard
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were the most recycled
materials
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,
although
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their tendency was declining
while
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others experienced an upward trend, albeit with some fluctuations.
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,
paper
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and
cardboard
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were mostly recycled goods,
although
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the trend was downward for these
materials
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while
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others experienced an upward direction. Even though there were some fluctuations. It can be seen that the
paper
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and
cardboard
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recycling standard was higher than that of other
materials
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well under 70% in 1982.Followed by 5% percentage was going up in 1986 but in 1990 suddenly dropped to around 65%.In the later year ( 1994) fluctuated and rose over 80%. From 1994 to 2010
this
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amount gradually declined and hit 70%.Compared to other
materials
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this
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rate was higher. In 1982, containers which were made of glass raised by 5%.
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,
this
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percentage significantly decreased (40%) in 1990.
in addition
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, in the next ,year the peak was, the same as it was
initially
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(50%).And started continuously rising throughout the period,
then
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reached 60% in 2010. It is interesting that the two remaining
materials
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(aluminium cans and plastics) followed the same pattern whilst aluminium cans started being recycled in 1986(considerably less than 10%). It was clear that
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process significantly went up to 45% in 2010. Least recycling process made by plastics from binging to end of the period (under 5% to close to 10%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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