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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way, while others prefer one-to-one instructions. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays the types of
study
 are more varied than in the past by modern facilities available and increase the number of majorities and universities in our countries .The following paragraphs would be shed light on my viewpoint. ,First of ,all some , researchers think that the type of
study
 and methods should be improved by collecting groups of
study
 and discussing our opinion and solutions,
also
 our communication skills with each other and making the students more confident about themself .
On the other hand
 , other people think it will not cater for the improvement of their knowledge by disrupting the focus on each other .From my respective , I firmly think that the
study
 in a group is more productive ,improving your education and personality.
For instance
 , when you look at medical sciences the doctors always have around in the hospital with a group of students and discuss some cases with them ,
this
 way will be increase the critical thinking for your education and give the students the power to introduce the problems and found solutions. In compendium, I want to reiterate that even though impactful advantages are reached in a group of discussion times it's more effective to find an instructor for only you to improve the quality of your education .
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