Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a little to modify
nature
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difference .From my point of view,
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and large
companies
are playing a big role at improve our
environment
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around the world and from my way of thinking every person responsible to protect the
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the
environment
because they have not got enough time to improve the
environment
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about
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our
environment
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the other hand,
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others strongly believe that only
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companies
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real sense
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the
environment
. It is true that both of them are playing a big role at improve our
nature
because everyone knows that the government is a huge organisation around the world and not only
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large
companies
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environment
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huge
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worried about
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the
environment
. In conclusion,many
people
believe that only
governments
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companies
can make a positive effect
to
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the
environment
however
while
others think that not only
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humans
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nature
.In my personal opinion,
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governments
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people
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companies
can influence the
environment
.
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  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
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  • climate change
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  • legislation
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