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The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages.To what extent do you agree with this statement.

Since the
world
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 became globalised in
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 century,the demand
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 a common
language
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 was quite apparent, and the
English
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language
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 has filled that communication gap,
bieng
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being
 used as lingua
frunca
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Franca
franc
, which has been accepted by
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the majority
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 of
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pubulation
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population
.
while
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,
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dislike it.
however
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, I firmly believe, it provides assistance in developing
revanues
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revenues
 and creating
inovations
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innovations
, which overshadows its few drawbacks.
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, It is undeniable that
English
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 has provided a
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 platform for communication on
global
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a global
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 scale. which has removed barriers, that tends to
cread
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create
 obstacle among speakers from different
orgin
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origins
. In
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 of benefits all around the
world
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. The chief contribution is observed in an upsurge of global trade.
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Engllish
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English
is used
a
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medium of instruction on
global
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a global
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 scale,to ensure smooth and effective trade by countering all
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linguistics
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 barriers.
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,it stimulates
economy
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the economy
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.
Secondly
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 a similar
tend
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seen
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is seen
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 in
tourist
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the tourist
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 industry as well.
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, in order
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to
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 escape from poverty, Srilanakan indigenous
adapted
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adopted
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english
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 as
secondary
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a secondary
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language
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 to attract
internation
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international
 tourists.
lastly
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, in all research institutes,
emelish
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English
embellish
 is considered
as
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a
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a sophisatated
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sophisatated
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sophisticated
language
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 .
This
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assist
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 researchers
to comprehend
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in comprehending
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 each
others
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 ideas and benefits the
world
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.
Nevertheless
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, some claim that if
English
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,
used
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 as
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world
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's single
language
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,it will probably create
few
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 problems.
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issue is attributed to
its
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 difficult nature of teaching and learning
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because
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a
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number of people find it
challanging
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challenging
 to write and speak in
efficient
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an efficient
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 manner. To illustrate citing a recently published article,which has revealed, 40
percent
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per cent
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of non-native-english
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non-native-
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non-native-English
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english
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 speakers , usually attend
English
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 medium school. still,encounter difficulties in speaking it.
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, it is
also
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 to local dialects, Since
majority
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the majority
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 of
language
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 diversity is lost with
rapid
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the rapid
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 incorporation of
English
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.
Nonetheless
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,In my opinion,these minor impacts are negligible relative to its contribution. By the way of conclusion,it is justified that
English
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 has revolutionised the
world
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 on a wider range,owing to its multiple positive impacts
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 vague assumptions about its negative effects.I strongly support
this
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 assertion on account of
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 factors.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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