Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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argued that
experiments
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on living
things
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like
animals
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are
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a violation
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violation
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. These
people
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assert that
animals
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can feel pain like humans do, so we have to stop animal
tests
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.
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, If experimentation on
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were not conducted, there will be nothing for
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to cure or care
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. Some
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argue that animal
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are
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by a human, because
animals
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also
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rights
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to live, that human
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can not abuse those
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. At the same time, living
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like rats, pigs and other
animals
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would feel fatal pain from animal
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this
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assertions are true, but living in modern times, eliminating animal
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is
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inevitable
. Thanks to the progress of medicine, many
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have a chance to live longer and even cure their
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bodies
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. At
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moment, animal
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are
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key point.
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, by testing
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to create drugs to cure cancer,
people
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who suffered from cancer can be cured and live longer.
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,
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who want to be a parent
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they have no ability to carry a baby,
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have benefits
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animal
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. Because it can not be conducted
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on
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humans,
things
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like using a uterus. So we use
animals
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to find these solutions, at
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point, we can find our benefits from animal
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.
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, owing to experimentation on
animals
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, nowadays
people
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are living in a better world than
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past. If the
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technique
develops, we might consider getting rid of those
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is
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the time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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