You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to you with regard to missing my

bag

during my staying in The Taj hotel, I found out that my

bag

was not with me after the weekend I spent in your hotel,

Firstly

let me provide you with my staying information I was there on the fifth of June, and left the following day.

Secondly

, I was

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the third floor in room number 2458,

however

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there were two rooms nearly having the same number, I was in the double room. About my

bag

description, it is a white large

bag

with a silver hand and tree design on the side. Anybody could identify my

bag

because it has a unique design, I ordered

this

style to make it different from any other one,

thus

the room services workers will not be confused to identify it, I hope they will find it before it

lost

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. I am looking forward

for

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your kind reply. Yours faithfully, Adam Martin

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7 paragraphs

165 words

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