You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to you with regard to missing my

bag

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during my staying in The Taj hotel, I found out that my

bag

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was not with me after the weekend I spent in your hotel,

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let me provide you with my staying information I was there on the fifth of June, and left the following day.

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the third floor in room number 2458,

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however

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there were two rooms nearly having the same number, I was in the double room. About my

bag

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description, it is a white large

bag

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with a silver hand and tree design on the side. Anybody could identify my

bag

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because it has a unique design, I ordered

this

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style to make it different from any other one,

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the room services workers will not be confused to identify it, I hope they will find it before it

lost

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. I am looking forward

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your kind reply. Yours faithfully, Adam Martin

abdoo.magicooMon Mar 20 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

165 words

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You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: *When did you visit the hotel. *the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want but other people think that they should be more realistic and think more about their future.

Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag