Some people are born to be a leader, others believe that leadership can be learned, Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some
people
who came to
this
world with
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capability to rule ,
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others think that
this
ability can be attained by practice.
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the view that
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talent can attain
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vigorous training. There are
people
who
born
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with the characteristics of a
leader
and reached their goal with their inborn strength will help them to achieve that.
This
may be
due to
the circumstances
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they are facing and some of them earn by
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,
hence
they are reaching the position without
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any
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taking any effort. There are some rulers
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their position because
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their forefathers
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kings ,
thus
they become a part of royal families. In that
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it can be considered that they
born
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to be ruled.
On the other hand
, leadership can
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by
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regular practice and interference
in
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the
people
. There
for
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willingness to work hard ,and face the consequences
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the turbulence of politics is
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,
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that
will help them to
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out through the turmoil from their own group and from the opposition.
As a result
, a good
leader
with all these
character
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will build up and become
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asset to the society and nation. So learning is an important factor to become a good
leader
. In my opinion, leadership can be achieved by
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practice
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and making interactions with
people
and colleagues without hesitation and prejudice.
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it
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they
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need
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certain sacrifices and anticipation to
fulfill
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their dreams to become a
leader
.
This
leads to
make
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a perfect
leader
with good vision and power to
controll
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control
all the bureaucracy , which is the essential part of governing.
To sum up
, some
people
are born with certain talents and their ancestral power to become the
leader
,but a proper way to become a
leader
is ,
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through sacrifice
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and willingness to approach difficulties. I believe that the
hardwork
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hard work
makes a proper
leader
with essential knowledge and characteristics
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