The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005

The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005
The line graph presents three common criminal activities in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.
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, there was an increased statistic of criminals engaging in criminal activities on the street,
while
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the figure of car-stealing and house robbery was significantly reduced. It is obvious that the total of all three criminal activities is greater in 2005 than in 1970. Looking at the details, there was no street stealing from 1970 to 1990. Until 1995, the total of incidents began to rise to 0.1
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, ending at 0.2
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in 2005.
On the contrary
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, car stealing was the top criminal activity in 1970 with 0.4
million
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cases occurring.
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trend continued to progress steadily, peaking at 1.6
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in 1995.
Thereafter
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, the number of car stealing experienced a dramatic fall, ending at 1
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in 2005. House robbery followed a similar trend, with 0.2
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incidents in 1970. Even though a fluctuation was witnessed from the 1980s to the 1990s, a decline was seen in 1995 with 0.7
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house robberies occurring, ending at 0.5
million
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in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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