The chart below shows the result of a survey about poeple's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.

The chart below shows the result of  a survey about poeple's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.
This
bar graph displays the data collected in a survey about the
coffee
and tea buying habits of
residents
in five
cities
in Australia in the
last
four weeks.
Overall
, in all the
cities
except
Adelaide
, more people went to café for
coffee
or tea than bought instant
coffee
or fresh
coffee
. In
Adelaide
, going to a cafe and buying instant
coffee
were equally common. Most
residents
in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisban visited a cafe for
coffee
or tea, at approximately 64, 63, 62 and 55 per
cent
respectively,
whereas
just under half of
residents
in
Adelaide
did so. These five
cities
also
had roughly half of the
residents
purchasing instant
coffee
, and the figures in Hobart and Brisbane were almost 55 per
cent
. In comparison, the proportion of people who bought fresh
coffee
was never as high as 45 per
cent
in any of the five
cities
, with those in Brisbane and
Adelaide
, both at nearly 35 per
cent
, less likely than those in the other three
cities
to do so. (Reference: IELTS Eassy Bank https://www.ieltsessaybank.com/
coffee
-buying-habits/)
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