The chart below shows the result of a survey about poeple's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.
This
bar graph displays the data collected in a survey about the coffee
and tea buying habits of residents
in five cities
in Australia in the last
four weeks.
Overall
, in all the cities
except Adelaide
, more people went to café for coffee
or tea than bought instant coffee
or fresh coffee
. In Adelaide
, going to a cafe and buying instant coffee
were equally common.
Most residents
in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisban visited a cafe for coffee
or tea, at approximately 64, 63, 62 and 55 per cent
respectively, whereas
just under half of residents
in Adelaide
did so. These five cities
also
had roughly half of the residents
purchasing instant coffee
, and the figures in Hobart and Brisbane were almost 55 per cent
.
In comparison, the proportion of people who bought fresh coffee
was never as high as 45 per cent
in any of the five cities
, with those in Brisbane and Adelaide
, both at nearly 35 per cent
, less likely than those in the other three cities
to do so.
(Reference: IELTS Eassy Bank https://www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee
-buying-habits/)Submitted by CC
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