The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two figures illustrate the changes in
cinema
visits in four
age
groups in Auckland from 1995 to 2003. It is obvious that the trend of
cinema
visitors
went down in every
age
group,
while
the
proportion
of
this
had fluctuated over
this
time in Auckland.
Additionally
, the
proportion
of
cinema
visitors
and the average
number
of them had undergone different trends. First of foremost, at the beginning of the period, there had opposite trends between the
proportion
of
cinema
visitors
and the average
number
of them. The
proportion
of
cinema
visitors
had risen from 67% to 72% between 1995 and 1999 compared to the average
number
of it decreased from 10.3 to 7.3. After the next 4 years, there was a slightly fluctuate in the
proportion
of
cinema
visitors
and had the same
proportion
in 2003.
However
, the average
number
of
cinema
visitors
had still gone down to 8.3.
Nonetheless
, we can see that the four
age
groups had similar patterns in the average
number
of
cinema
visitors
during
this
period.
Additionally
, all the
age
groups in the average
number
of
cinema
visitors
had fluctuated and had undergone a decrease. It is striking that the highest
age
group were 14-24 years old above 11, and the lowest was above 50 years old about 9.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.

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