The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The line graphs provide information between 1920 and 2019 in one nation about the development of electrical appliances in houses and the number of hours that housework consumes in each house for 1 week.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the
overall
trend of people that have electrical facilities at home rose;
however
, at the same
time
, the amount of usage
time
fell significantly in the beginning. A closer look at the first diagram reveals the data about the percentage of people who use electrical facilities
such
as washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners at their residences. Starting from 1920, the number of residents who owned refrigerators and vacuum cleaners increased noticeably;
on the other hand
, the number of washing machine owners fluctuated, but most developed in a good way. The second chart indicates the amount of
time
that was spent by the population in one week doing their housework in their residence. In 1920, the owners used electrical machines to do their housework,
such
as cleaning clothes, cooking food, and sweeping the floor to name but a few, for 50 hours per week.
However
, after that, the
time
usage dropped rapidly and started to become steady in 1960 until reaching almost 10 hours in 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall, such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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