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The charts show the sources of electricity produced 4 countries between 2003 and 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuras. and make comparisons where comparisons where relevant

The charts show the sources of electricity produced 4 countries between 2003 and 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuras. and make comparisons where comparisons where relevant
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The given chats display the type of
power
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 produced by India, Sweden, Marocco, and Vietnam in the 2003-2008 period.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the most popular sources used are fossil fuel and
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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. Notably, in Marocco and Vietnam nuclear
power
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it
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is not present. In terms of countries not using nuclear energy, morocco's energy came almost entirely from a hydro origin.
This
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 one accounted for the surprising percentage of 95
while
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 in Vietnam it was used just less than half of Morocco's usage.
On the other hand
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, in Sweden, nuclear
power
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 made up 44% of the sources used in the 5-year time, unlike India which was at less than 5%. The latter most used energy was
the
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hydropower at 52% and the former's was fossil fuel at approximately 82%.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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