The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table highlights data about the number of items
such
as coffee
, tea, pastries and sandwiches which sales
in a coffee
shop in
Change preposition
at
the
certain time and in place of an office building.
Correct article usage
a
Overall
, what stands out from the table is that coffee
purchase is by far the most popular drink in
average, Change preposition
on
while
tea intake illustrates the least common item over time. Another interesting finding is that coffee
demand shows the highest number of sales
in the morning.
In detail, coffee
usage is nearly half as popular in the afternoon as at 7.30-10.30 am, with figures of 145 and 265 respectively. However
, 10.30-2.30 is not quite as common as in the evening. Regarding tea purchases, it comes
bottom of the table from 10.30 am until 5.30 pm. Correct subject-verb agreement
come
Although
, it is approximately twice as popular in the earlier morning as in the later, at 110 compared to 75.
By contrast
, sandwich sales
are not nearly as popular as pastries at 7.30-10.30 am, the former figure is 50, but the latter quantity is 275. Finally
, between the morning and the Correct your spelling
afternoon
afteroon
Add a comma
,afteroon
this
trend is significantly different, pastrie
purchases consist of 95, Correct your spelling
pastries
pastry
while
sandwiches show 200 sales
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