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Some think newspaper are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion?

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In our modern life,
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newspaper
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 have been considered the most reliable source of information.
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, some
people
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insists
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 that local
news
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 sources are better than paper lines. In my opinion, it depends upon the age of
people
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, because many
people
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’s tastes change with time. In the past
people
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 considered
newspapers
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 to be reliable, but now there are various social networks. Any
news
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 you need can be found on social networks. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both sides and express my opinion.
To begin
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 with,
newspapers
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 are still popular among
people
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 even though they live in a
glovalized
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globalized
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 world. First of all, older
people
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 like reading
newspapers
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 and they do not want to change their reading habits.
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, older
people
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 prefer to read
newspapers
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.
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, a
newspaper
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 is a reliable source of information change because it is written and produced by a journalist and a
newspaper
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 production company.
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, in our country, almost all older
people
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 believe in
newspapers
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 new because they believe that another source of
news
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 has spread false information about what happened.
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 the other hand, social networks are
more
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preferred among young and educated
people
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due to
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time saving
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 and
lase
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 of transportation.
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, there are various social media applications
such
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 as YouTube, Facebook, new websites and many more where individuals can access any
news
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 portal anywhere and anytime.
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, if someone wants to know the
news
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 about the latest football game during the college break but does not have a
newspaper
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 in his hand
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 they can know the
news
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 through their
call
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cell
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 phones.
To sum up
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 , both media have their importance
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people
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’s preferences. I think
people
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 should be active on both sides because sometimes they get
news
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 that
it
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 not published by any registered company.
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