The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate the appearance of Birshire which is a tiny
town
nowadays and in the future.
Overall
,now the
town
is full of eco spots,
such
as farms,the
park
and the field.
However
,plans for its development include significant differences in the
town
structure.In ,future the
town
will remove all eco places and replace them with the market,the car
park
and the sports centre.
Firstly
,nowadays Birshire looks perfect because it has numerous plants which improve the environment.The North side of the
town
starts with a road beside which are the market and the farm.Under Farmer's market, accommodations are located nearby McGoldrick road.
This
road is right in the centre of the
town
.On the right side of it is a Hoolaham farm.Under it are a Public
park
and an open field.Opposite the perk are located shops.
Secondly
,in the future
town
will have notable changes. Roads will become longer and the width of the
town
will increase.It is can be seen easily that the number of houses which are in the West is going to rise.
However
,not only
this
will change.All nature spots will be replaced.One farm will be changed by the supermarket,
while
the other one will be a place for a car
park
.
On the other hand
,the public
park
will be still the same size and will stay in the same place.The
last
addition is a sports centre,which will be created in place of a modern open field
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