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You have begun a new course at university and the professor gave you the first assignment of the course.You are not sure how to write the assignment. Write an email to your professor.In your letter: State your purpose Explain the problem Ask for an appoinment to discuss it

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Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. Who is your new student? I have begun a new course at
this
 university four days ago. If you can remember me, you gave me an assignment. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about my issue . Which one depends on your assignment?
This
 is the reason ,
l
 have never written
this
 type of task before . My aim is to ask you to give me another piece of homework . Because if
l
 write
this
l
 might get into a lot of trouble. Yet, if you want to solve
this
 problem we have another way .
That is
 to say, if you have free time you could talk about it over tea together . After that,
l
 know enough information about it . Believe me .
That is
, if you teach me
l
 can definitely write
this
 assignment. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your attention . Yours faithfully, Joziba Maxmasoliyeva
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constructive
Task Response: The purpose of the letter is unclear and the problem is not clearly explained. The request for a new assignment is not properly formulated.
constructive
Coherence and Cohesion: The logical structure of the letter is weak, and the greeting and closing are inappropriate. The letter lacks a clear single idea per paragraph, and the information is not presented in a coherent manner.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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