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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

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The two diagrams illustrate the refurbishment of a conference
center
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 in two specific years: 2010 and 2025
Overall
, it is evident that, with the exception of the
north-west
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 part of the map, the other parts of
this
 location will experience a significant number of alterations. Meanwhile, the maps
also
 indicate that various functional
rooms
 will be added.
To begin
 with, located in the
north-west
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 corner, two multipurpose
rooms
 and the
hall
 are intended to remain almost unchanged. The
hall
's size will be slightly increased.
Besides
, a
resident
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hall
 with 20
rooms
 will be established next to the right of the
hall
 in the next 15 years.
In addition
, the small
garden
 on the right of the map will be transformed into a new car park,
whereas
 the old parking lot will be demolished to make way for the expansion of the main
garden
. Meanwhile, there has been no change in the position of the reception desk, which lies to the north of the central
garden
, over time. At the bottom of the plan, there is the emergence of numerous new function
rooms
 in the following 15 years. To elaborate, an IT
center
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 and double meeting
rooms
 will be constructed in the
south-west
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 corner of the central
garden
,
while
 a game room and a music room will be built in the
south-east
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southeast
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