During a recent plane journey you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter Remind him where and when you met Tell him what kind of job you are interested in See why you think you would be suitable for a job

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Dear Leo, I hope
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email finds
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well. It`s Natalie, we
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at
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excursion
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an excursion
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tour in France. Do you remember me? I helped you with taking photos during the trip. I am writing to you
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apply
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because I want to move to Denmark and now trying to get a job there. As I remember, you told me that you are looking for an administrator in a new Copenhagen restaurant. Is
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job still available? I have 8 years
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experience in
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field. I had been working for 2 years in
Italian
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restaurant in Kyiv as a waitress. And 6 years as an administrator in the same chain of restaurants. So, I have a lot of knowledge and experience. I
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have finished numerous courses and have different certificates that
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with
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type of business. Can you help me
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matter? Maybe you need an administrator or waitress in
other restaurant
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another restaurant
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in your chain. I will ad my CV to
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latter
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letter
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so you can check it. Best regards, Natalie
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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