The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The diagram highlights the process by which tomato

ketchup

is produced. There are fifteen steps, which start with picking tomatoes and end with adding

ketchup

to meals.

The first step is

that collect and put tomatoes in a basket. Once it has been sorted into good and bad ones, the tomatoes are

then

sent to the factory so that they will make from that

ketchup

. At

this

point, the skin is removed, after which being put in a container. Having been crushed, the factory adds species

such

as sugar, vinegar and salt.

Following

this

, the mixture is boiled and

then

left for two hours.

The following step is

pouring tomato

ketchup

into bottles. The employees label each bottle, and

then

they check it for quality control in order to avoid spoiled goods. When the bottles have been put into boxes, it is

then

loaded into a lorry, which delivers products to supermarkets, where people can find them. The

last

stage is to buy

ketchup

and eat it with hamburgers and fries.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

171 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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