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Today friendly robots are being developed to help people at work and home . Do you think that the positive development outweigh the negative?

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Nowadays, friendly robots are being fabricated to aid people at
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work
 places and at their
residence
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. In my point of view, I believe that the benefits of using
robot
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is
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 higher than it drawbacks.
This
 essay will briefly explain the reasons for that.
To begin
 with, technology has changed the way of doing things. In
today
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 century, most activities need to be done faster and easier and with
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a robot
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robot
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 that goal can be achieved.
Moreover
, the machine
help
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 people to do
majority
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the majority
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 of their duty both at home and
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in work
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work place
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faster and less
stressful
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. For
a
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example,
University
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 of Mines and Technology in Ghana indicates that
a
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job that
robot
 can
used
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 one day to accomplish, human beings will use one week to finish the same
work
 .
On the other hand
, some think that the
robot
 will cause unemployment to the individual since the
robot
 can perform most of the
work
 without being exhausted.
Moreover
, whenever the
robot
 gets a fault it will produce error items.
For instance
, about 36% of Ghanaian men were using their manpower to pound fufu for a living but now
due to
 the invention of the fufu machine, all those people have lost their job and has become
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. In conclusion, with the help of robots , most
task
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 are completed faster and easier at
work
 and home with no stress.
However
,
robot
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also
 creates unemployment
to
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the
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society. On
this
 note, I believe that
robot
 is more productive than it detrimental effect .
Then
 the positive effects outweigh the negative.
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