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Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion

In our modern life,in more and more provinces human beings spend too much on
weddings
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.Many humans believe that it is very important to spend a
lot
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 of
money
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 on wedding ceremonies.Other individuals say that has to be simple and not very grand.
This
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 essay will discuss and apply both views. On the one hand,these days all
people
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 have many dreams about their wedding.They want to do their wedding is very best than others.
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 why by it they spend a huge amount of
money
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.
This
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 condition helps them to illustrate their wealth to other
people
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.Take as an example,
according to
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 the statistics,nowadays 60 per cent of individuals celebrate their wedding through spend for
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money
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.
On the other hand
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,other humans think that every person spends for
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 a little
money
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 on everything like
weddings
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.It helps them and others apply not to waste their
money
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 and food.We know,waste is very harmful to every person.Because it brings to
people
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 bad conditions.
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, apply all humans do not be applied to rich
people
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.If
also
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 they arrange their wedding and spend a
lot
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 of
money
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,it brings them a
lot
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 of challenges.They request a
lot
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 of
money
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 from others for celebrating the wedding. In conclusion,
this
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 essay discusses applying both views about
weddings
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.From my way of thinking, the second view is the very greatest way of arranging
weddings
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.

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Your opinion

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