Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion
In our modern life,in more and more provinces human beings spend too much on
weddings
.Many humans believe that it is very important to spend a lot
of money
on wedding ceremonies.Other individuals say that has to be simple and not very grand.This
essay will discuss and apply both views.
On the one hand,these days all people
have many dreams about their wedding.They want to do their wedding is very best than others.That is
why by it they spend a huge amount of money
.This
condition helps them to illustrate their wealth to other people
.Take as an example,according to
the statistics,nowadays 60 per cent of individuals celebrate their wedding through spend for apply
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forapply
money
.
On the other hand
,other humans think that every person spends for forapply
a little Correct your spelling
for apply
money
on everything like weddings
.It helps them and others apply not to waste their money
and food.We know,waste is very harmful to every person.Because it brings to people
bad conditions.Besides
, apply all humans do not be applied to rich people
.If also
they arrange their wedding and spend a lot
of money
,it brings them a lot
of challenges.They request a lot
of money
from others for celebrating the wedding.
In conclusion,this
essay discusses applying both views about weddings
.From my way of thinking, the second view is the very greatest way of arranging weddings
.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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