Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it
The number of
people
with chronic diseases such
as hypertension dan diabetes mellitus has continued to increase. Therefore
, experts in health
advise the public to have a healthy lifestyle
. However
, it seems that many people
have difficulty starting healthier habits. In this
essay, I will discuss the possible causes and sollutions
to Correct your spelling
solutions
this
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these
problems
.
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problem
To begin
with, in this
modern society, people
need to live more efficiently. For example
, as both parents work, there is less time to cook health
Replace the word
healthy
meal
for themselves and their Fix the agreement mistake
meals
childrens
. It leads to Correct your spelling
children
unhealty
habits Correct your spelling
unhealthy
such
as buying fastfood
for dinner or lunch. As we all know that Correct your spelling
fast food
fast-food
this kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
these kinds
dishes
(pizza, burgers) Fix the agreement mistake
dish
contain
high fats and Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
callories
that may be detrimental Correct your spelling
calories
for
our Change preposition
to
health
in the future.
Secondly
, with the advance of technology in transportation and entertainment, public
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the public
nowdays
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nowadays
tend
to have a sedentary Change the verb form
tends
lifestyle
. In the past, we used to walk or ride a bike to go to work or school. Now, with cars and public transports
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
become
more available, Wrong verb form
becoming
people
prefer to used
these to get around. Change the verb
use
Furthermore
, workers spend hours in their offices and on the weekends they like relaxing and doing their hobbies. These, make excersicing
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exercising
seems
to be the Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
last
choice.
There are sollution
that can be proposed to tackle these problems. Correct your spelling
solutions
solution
Firstly
, children should be taught about health
problems and health
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healthy
lifestyle
from Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
the
early age, so Correct article usage
an
the
will have healthy habits when they get older. Correct your spelling
they
Second,
parents should set examples at home, such
as providing simple cooked meals for breakfast and dinner instead
of buying food from restaurants.
Employers should also
contribute to this
matter by allowing the workers to have a
little time for exercising in the office. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, many government offices in Malang west-Java encourage the workers to conduct physical activities for two hours such
as aerobic
or Replace the word
aerobics
sport
every Fix the agreement mistake
sports
friday
morning. I think Change the capitalization
Friday
this
is a good example of The government's contribution to encourge
the public to lead an active Correct your spelling
encourage
lifestyle
.
In conclusion, despite experts' advice to be more physically active, people
continue to lead an
unhealthy Correct article usage
apply
lifestyle
. These can be caused by busy schedules or Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
lack
of motivation. Some measures that can be done include education for young Correct article usage
a lack
people
and employers
contributions.Change noun form
employers'
employer's
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