You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighborhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to Mr Koto, the manager. In your letter: •explain who you are •describe the problem exactly •make suggestions to improve the gym
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Dear Mr Koto,
I am writing
because
a few members’ inconsiderate behaviours in the gym. It is Add the preposition
ofbecause
also
a concern for cleanliness and I think people should be notified.
I have observed, there aren’t enough notices on the do’s and don’ts posted in the gym. Hence
, I recommend, that you please speak to these individuals and ensure the placards to maintain hygiene are placed in the gym at the earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Mel GibsonSubmitted by singmahesh on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.