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There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a go ifod or a bad thing?

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The pie graph given illustrates the producing amount of
oil
 measured in barrels per day(units:
MB
/D) in terms of seven areas in the world in 2001.
Overall
, the main production was contributed by the middle east. Africa was followed, and the lowest-producing ability was Europe. The other four countries accounted for similar numbers. It is clear to see that the total number of
oil
 production in the middle east was by far the highest, nearly a quarter of the total amount, with 22.2(
MB
/D). And the second-ranking producing
oil
 was the American and Canadian areas, with a total of 14(
MB
/D).
By contrast
, the lowest amount of
oil
 production was in Europe, with merely 6.8(
MB
/D).
In addition
, the Asia pacific (xx
MB
/D) was twice that of the region of Latin America.
Besides
, the
oil
 contribution from the other three countries was not significant with the numbers 8,8 and 8.7 respectively.
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