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Some people think that distance learning programs can never be as good as traditional, face-to-face education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Overall
, there were more people who listened to radio programs in the morning
while
 more citizens watched television at night.
Furthermore
, the percentage of television audiences was higher than that of radio in the evening. It is clear to see that the proportion of radio programs was nearly 10% at 6am,
then
 experienced a sharp increase, peaking at approximately 28%. the figures showed a gradual decline until they reached the lowest point of around 2% at midnight.
However
, the significant minority of television rate stood at 2%, climbing to the highest proportion of nearly 50% at 8pm, rising by almost 48%. From that point, it went down dramatically at the late of night.
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