Nowadays, people usually retire at the age of 60 or 65. Is this a positive or negative development. Give your opinion with relevant examples.

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could have been an easy task but with the circumstances I had it became difficult, but I didn’t give up against any odds. I stayed focused and

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accomplished what I aimed for.

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, the same will be the approach

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towards any

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that I may have to face even

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move from person to person.

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have a brief success story of me being able to complete 5 months of internship after completing my graduation. Yes,

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may sound pretty normal deal for a student, but for me odds were unbelievable.During my internship, I worked for Amul Which is India's largest dairy brand.my internship started with the learning of adulteration of

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and their testing for the first month.Afterwards, I studied How to procure

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from nearby villages and how to handle

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for a long time without deteriorating.When I grab all these skills related to procurement.I

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get a chance for 3 months for a job as a centre in charge where I collected

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for both shifts (Morning and Evening).At that time I test at least 100 samples on a single shift.

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, where I work there is a lot of adulterated

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brought by the farmer to the collection centre.

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, I was the Whole and sole of the procurement department since I am the centre in charge I have to make all important decisions regarding the acceptance and rejection of

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.

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could have been an easy task but with the circumstances I had it became difficult, but I didn’t give up against any odds. I stayed focused and

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accomplished what I aimed for.

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, the same will be the approach towards any challenge that I may have to face even

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