The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the number of the population born inside and outside
Australia
who are living in the city centre, countryside and municipality by percentage between 1995 and 2010.
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Overall
, the majority of them were born outside Linking Words
Australia
and lived in the cities in both years, Use synonyms
whereas
people born outside and in Linking Words
Australia
are unlikely to live in the Use synonyms
towns
and rural areas.
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Furthermore
, most public in and outside Linking Words
Australia
in 1995 lived in cities and Use synonyms
towns
50% and 60% respectively, Use synonyms
while
others prefer in rural areas with 30% in Linking Words
Australia
and 40% outside Use synonyms
Australia
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Also
least percentage of the crowd lives in Linking Words
towns
with 20% in Use synonyms
Australia
and 10% outside the country in the same year, Use synonyms
however
, in 2010, it is seen that there is a dramatic decrease in the population living in rural areas and Linking Words
towns
with less than 15% in and out of the nation, Use synonyms
while
folk are still likely to live in the cities with 80% outside and 70% in the country.Linking Words
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