Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

#cinema #manager #movie #theatre #jacket #film

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,Hi

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Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding my

jacket

which is lost yesterday in

movie

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the movie

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theather

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theatre

Audi C and providing you

the

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with the

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full details with colour, size and seat number. Helping out to find me the

jacket

Firstly

, I just

wanted

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towanted

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give you all the details so

its

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it's

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really helpful to you. My

movie

statred

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started

stated

time was at 7pm evening

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Audi C the main location

Saket

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of Saket

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PVR,

Moreover

, my

seats

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seat

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number was

17,18 second

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17,18-second

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last

corner seat of the

movie

hall. I have

red

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a red

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jacket

with 4 pockets obviously

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the expansive

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expansive

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expensive

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brand ZARA. during the

movie

I felt

little

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a little

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suffugated

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suffocated

suffumigated

then

I remove that and I

did'nt

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didn't

realised after

end

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the end

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the

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of the

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movie

I lost it in

hall

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the hall

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. As per the

descruption

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description

, I wanted to go there again and try to find the

jacket

, If you allow me to go inside the

movie

theater

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theatre

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and Its easy to get my

jacket

back

eassily

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easily

. Your promoted response

really

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is really

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appriciated

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appreciated

. Yours, Faithfully. Surbhi Tyagi

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

164 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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