In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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century, it has been trending, that manufacturers pinpoint
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the new features of their merchandise. In the present
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the reason
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view of both advantages and disadvantages of
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Firstly
,the aim of producing
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is to sell them, so it is obvious that companies try to persuade people to purchase their products in any way.
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merchandise, manufacturers should attract
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attention to the advantages that their products have,
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tendency to talk about the new features that they have.
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were a company owner, I would mention the new abilities of my products, because it could be helpful
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promoting them. In my opinion, on the one hand, it can have some benefits.
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new touch LCD, that I have never heard bout
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bought it.
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it can have a few negative
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because all producers are using
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method to
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their
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can tend to unreliable
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in
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eyes.
For instance
, every time when you watch any advertisement on tv, all of them
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emphasize that their
goods
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. In conclusion,
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companies in order to sell their product emphasize
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their
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' new abilities.
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sometimes it can be a negative trend,
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I think mostly it is positive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Fast-paced
  • Distinguishing
  • Psychological aspect
  • Inherently
  • Perceived
  • Continuous improvement
  • Revolutionary
  • Feasible
  • Throwaway culture
  • Undervalue
  • Longevity
  • Obscure
  • Novelty
  • Unsatisfactory
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