The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost)

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer

(compost)
The graph demonstrates the production of garden fertilizer made from recycled organic waste.
Overall
, the process comprises two main stages: the collection of organic waste into a specific
container
and the treatment to make compost. The first stage requires a two cubic meter in volume type of plastic
container
which has several holes in the sides to allow the air to flow through the
container
.
Afterward
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, the bottle is filled with wastes like food, grass and newspaper with the exact position. Each type of waste is layered
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a
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approximately 15cm thick layer. Turns to the second stage, which is the longest in the process.
First,
nitrogen and hot water are added to the
container
in order
to
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the transformation
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.
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, heat will be provided to accelerate the process. After about 6 months later, the
wastes
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will turn into compost which is ready to use in the garden as a fertilizer.
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