Nowadays, as a part of the educational process, students work at a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, internships and other types of unpaid jobs have been added to the

students

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curriculum. There are several benefits that pupils can gain from

this

educational reform,

such

as the development of useful soft skills and a great advantage in order to pursue the career of their dreams.

However

,

this

experience

sometimes can lead to physical and psychological problems.

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essay argues that the advantages of

this

new educational method don't overcome the disadvantages and it will give reasons for

this

belief in the upcoming paragraphs. It is undeniable that internships are beneficial for students. First and foremost, they give the pupil the possibility to have a first

experience

in the world of work so that they can be better prepared to enter the workforce. In fact, working in a real work environment requires you to establish professional relationships with your colleagues, share your ideas with a team,

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with eventual issues.

This

helps you to develop abilities that you're not able to learn at school

such

as skills in communication, problem-solving and adaptability.

Moreover

, schools usually try to arrange your job

experience

in a company that has to do with your studies and

therefore

your field of interest.

Hence

, being an intern in an organisation that you are likely to like, creates the basis for your possible employment!

Although

, the consequences that

this

experience

can have are terrible. In fact, many young people that took part

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felt very tired and stressed during and afterwards their internship. They stated that working long hours without earning any money led them to a state of deep depression. Because of that, they weren't able to do their usual activities after the working day

such

as sports and other hobbies since they felt exhausted and demotivated towards life.

Furthermore

, sometimes

this

educational method

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reveals

itself

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.

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years ago in

Italy

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a young boy

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16 years old died during

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internship. He was working within a building company and his task consisted in lifting heavy materials in the storage. Unfortunately, one day he lifted something huge that weighed too much which fell over him. Sadly, he got killed by it.

This

is just one extreme example of how risky can be to let young individuals do what they aren't ready to do.

To sum up

, even though unpaid occupations during school offer to

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student the chance to build some important features and contacts for their future, they can be dangerous and

scholars

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safety should be the priority.