Some people say history is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that , in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the world, learning our heritage

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more useful to maintain our identity. On the one hand, advocates

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believe that old

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life was, and

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that History

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the place that

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all the names of

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battles.

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considered one of the

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societies in the world, and most

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people

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are coming from every region to

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all these places.

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events

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important to make students

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their past

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countries and preserve it, but

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resource to rise tourism.

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our societies

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these days and

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vital materials

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studying in

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system.

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learning

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scientific and technological

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, they will become more creators and thinkers and try to create new

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inventions

and discoveries.

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educations

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, and

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technology. What can be said is scholarships and tech-equipments are the main reason for

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of regions. In conclusion,

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points

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mentioned above, it can

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that all

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History and science subjects are indispensable to studying because their large important for all countries, and I support

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view.