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Nowadays, as a part of the educational process, students work at a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, as a part of
educational
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system
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, undergraduates
work
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 at organizations for several months without getting a
salary
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.
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 life is
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expense
 and many
students
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feel
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 not interested in working without a
salary
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, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because having the opportunity to
work
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 in a corporation provides wide knowledge to the
students
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, many
students
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 feel not interested in supporting the idea of working without
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payment because life is expensive and they need to make monthly payments for a living,
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 is worth it.
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, many of these pupils live on their own and they need to pay rent and
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monthly
 bills, so it is almost impossible to accept working without a
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,
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 type of educational
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 is not common in
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 countries, so they feel
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 idea is
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. To explain
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, In the USA most universities do not
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require
 to their
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 to
work
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 without
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payment
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 any company as part of their educational
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, so when they get a license,
students
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 have
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a hard
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 time
to find
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 a job because they have no
experience
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 at all.
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, the
requierement
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requirement
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 is unfair because they have just
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 a degree. The positive side of
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 working for a short period of time without a
salary
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 before getting graduated is that they might get plenty of
experience
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while
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 they are studying. More importantly, they feel
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experience
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 of
havinga
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having a
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real job by working on a regular schedule routine, and
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 will provide them with feelings of security once
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 school.
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, many companies offer to these
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 a permanent position once they obtain a degree.
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, In
Mexico
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,Mexico
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 all the universities
requiere
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require
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 for a period of one year or an internship without a
salary
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 before getting a license, so these
students
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 obtain a degree with more than one
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thousands
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thousand
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 hours of
experience
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 is far way better because it prepares the
students
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 inside
classroom
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the classroom
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 and on the
field
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 they are
goig
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going
 to
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 once they finish. In conclusion,
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 working without
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payment might sound ridiculous for many
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,
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 is a great educational process to obtain wide
experience
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while
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 they are
students
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, so later on they can apply to any company and get immediately hired.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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