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Some people sa that modern technology has made shopping today easier. while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinio

#people #sa #technology #opinio
In
modern
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 world,
thechnology
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technology
 has been developed at
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 rate day by day.
People
 have generally mixed
view
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views
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 on
this
 topic. Some
people
 are of the opinion that
technology
 has enhanced
convenience
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the convenience
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 of shopping;
while
 others are
inconvinced
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unconvinced
inconvenienced
convinced
 by
the
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this
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 opinion.
This
 essay will discuss both views and
then
 will present my personal stance that
agree
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agrees
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 with the statement to some extent
with
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by
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 highlighting two key points, online stores and their impact on
seriours
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serious
seniors
.
To begin
 with, online
shpooing
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shopping
 site has been gaining
its
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popularity these days. It has saved us from
trouble
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the trouble
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 of going
physical
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to physical
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 stores. It
particulary
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particularly
 helped our life
in
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during
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 the pandemic period of Covid-19
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 when most
people
 in
this
 world were placed
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a restriction
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restriction
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restrictions
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 on all their daily activities. In
this
 situation, internet shopping was demanded since we could not feel free to go to
face-to-face
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the face-to-face
a face-to-face
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store
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stores
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.
The experience
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Experience
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 we survive under
threat
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the threat
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 of epidemic, we have become
famililar
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familiar
 with doing shopping online.
However
, it seems difficult for elderly
people
 to take advantage of e-commerce.
Although
 youngers who have grown up with
technology
 can manage it easily, older
people
 are not used to using modern
technology
. In
this
 situation, I would like to suggest
them
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they
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to
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be taught by their grandchildren.
This
 action helps them to gain not only computer literacy but
also
 communication beyond
distant
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the distant
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 gap of generation.
Additionally
, I believe that online purchasing skill is more advantageous for elderly
people
 than for
youngters
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youngsters
 when they lose their walking ability in
near
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 future.
To sum up
, I believe
technology
make
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makes
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 our shopping easier by allowing us to buy something
through
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with
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 just a click on
screen
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a screen
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 from our home. It
is
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especially show off its benefit when we are incapable of going to
physiscal
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physical
 store for any reason
such
 as pandemic and disability.
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