Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

era of globalisation, some individuals believe that authorities should make efforts to cope with environmental pollution and housing issues in order to avoid dangerous

diseases

or

illness

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. From my personal point of view, I agreed with the statement aforementioned above because pollution and overpopulation increase the chance of infection.

This

essay will

further

elaborate my points and

thus

lead to a logical conclusion. Supporting my agreement

to

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the given statement, I firmly think that there

are

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huge

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possibility that the

diseases

such

as asthma, respiratory problems and fever come from our

surrounding

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. As the number of populations

increase

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in the city area, the use of motor vehicles

are

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suprisingly

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surprisingly

high. To cite an example, the carbon dioxide or

smokes

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comes

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from cars, buses and motors

contribute

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to air

pollutions

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pollution

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which in

return

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give

a negative impacts

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on

people

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health.

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, people are can easily catch

a

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sick and afraid of getting outside. Explaining other points in favour

with

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this

statement is the residential sector

contribute

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contributes

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to major illness.

For instance

, when housing projects are made by property companies, it will increase the number of rubbish being thrown in the cities.

Consequently

, if the

governments

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unable to tackle

with

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this

situation, it will become the major

factors

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of serious

diseases

such

as malaria, dengue fever and tuberculosis that are

cause

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by virus infection. To summarise, it is true that the reason

of

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dangerous

diseases

comes from housing problems and human pollution. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate people about its damaging effects and

thus

for the government to take

a

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serious action

upon

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this

matter.