The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents the manufacture of five different types of
tea
. It is immediately apparent that
although
all the teas are produced from the same leaf, the differences in the manufacturing process result in five different types of
tea
.  The first three stages of manufacture are the same for all five teas. The leaves are grown, they are
then
plucked, and
following
this
withering of the leaves occurs. The final stage is
also
the same, which sees all the leaves dried in an oven.
However
, in the stages in between
this
, differing methods of production are employed.
To begin
,
white
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the white
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drink is unique as it involves no other processing.
In contrast
, green, oolong and large-leaf black
tea
are all rolled as part of the process.
However
,
while
green
tea
is steamed before being rolled but is not fermented, the other two teas are first rolled and
then
both fermented (oolong only slightly but large leaf black completely).
Finally
, small-leaf black
tea
is neither steamed nor rolled but is crushed before being fully fermented.
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