The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

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The maps compare the infrastructure of the conference

centre

in 2010 and a concept in 2025. In general, there are several changes in the right side of

this

centre

and some functional

rooms

would be added in the future. Look at the first map for more detail, in the Northwestern area, there were 2

rooms

and a reception in the middle. Next to them was a small hall and a huge car park. There were 2 gardens in

this

conference

centre

: larger one was in the South West and another one placed in the right side of the car park. After 15 years, there were some significant changes in

this

centre

. A new resident hall with 20

rooms

will be constructed in the NorthEastern area. The car park will be relocated to the right side of

this

building, which will replace the small garden. There was an expansion to the East of the biggest garden, and some functional room will be introduced in the South of

this

garden namely: an IT

centre

, a canteen and kitchen, 2 meeting

rooms

, a music room and a game room.

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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

Fully explain your ideas

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck.

Task 2: Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? why? Does the advantage or disadvantage?

In some high schools part of the curriculum requires students to participate in community work such as helping the elderly or disabled. In what way do children get benefits from this? Do you think it should be part of the curriculum?

Foreign visitors should pay for more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extant do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.