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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

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The maps compare the infrastructure of the conference
centre
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 in 2010 and a concept in 2025. In general, there are several changes in the right side of
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centre
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 and some functional
rooms
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 would be added in the future. Look at the first map for more detail, in the Northwestern area, there were 2
rooms
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 and a reception in the middle. Next to them was a small hall and a huge car park. There were 2 gardens in
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 conference
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: larger one was in the South West and another one placed in the right side of the car park. After 15 years, there were some significant changes in
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centre
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. A new resident hall with 20
rooms
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 will be constructed in the NorthEastern area. The car park will be relocated to the right side of
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 building, which will replace the small garden. There was an expansion to the East of the biggest garden, and some functional room will be introduced in the South of
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 garden namely: an IT
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, a canteen and kitchen, 2 meeting
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, a music room and a game room.
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