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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros than cons?

#machine #work #automation
It is undeniable that nowadays
the
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robotic systems and
machince
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machine
 automation can be equipped with complicated operations and assist humans to accomplish certain numerous difficult tasks automatically and effortlessly. In my view,
this
 trend has more benefits to
hamans
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humans
 than drawbacks;
however
, there are some adverse effects on humans to be considered. On the one hand,
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machine has played a crucial role in dealing with arduous and tough assignments these days. To put it simply, they can be assigned to
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generate
 a huge amount of flawless products, especially
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 an industrial level. Take
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 example of most developed nations, they have been developing
such
machinces
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machines
 to reduce the costs of production, which is important in the long run.
Secondly
, they work seamlessly and require less
maintainance
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maintenance
 compared to humans.
Also
, the earlier they replace
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traditional
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, the faster companies can thrive in success.
On the other hand
, the emergence of
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machinary
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machinery
 systems can directly result in today's labour force. To explain
this
further
, a number of traditional blue-collar jobs are prone to be replaced by
such
 machines.
As a result
 of
this
, millions of people will lose their jobs, which might lead to
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problems that
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 are not able to make meet ends.
For example
, in China, most factory
entreprenures
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entrepreneurs
 have adopted A.I. automated machines so that they can reach the maximum production process,
therefore
, many millions of
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 factory workers have
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 off recently. In conclusion, even though it is believed that conventional labours are unavoidably affected to be replaced by
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, I believe that there are more advantages in terms of utilizing advanced technology in the long term.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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