Some international companies are very powerful now and many people believe that it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and relevant examples.
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Supporting my disagreement with the given statement, I firmly reject that global companies contribute to negative effects on society. This
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such
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local citizen and reduces the unemployment rate.
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the international
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, the authorities have to take a
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people
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