The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The pie and Bar chart below illustrates the several reasons for arrest, in the 5 years ending 1994. From an
overall
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perspective, it's evident that the male percentage arrested is 32%, or rather higher than the female arrested, which is 9%.
Therefore
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, men are more common for the arrests, for vary widely motivations,
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as assault, drunk driving, breach of the order, theft, etc. Starting with the first case, which concerns public drinking, shows the highest percentage of 38%, relate to the females arrested,
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, the presence of men is 31%.
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is one of the common reasons why people become kept in prison, to avoid and make sure that, public places are safe. Whilst, alternatively another motivation that demonstrates the lowest percentage for both cases is "no answer", with 4.9% for a male and 7% for women.
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, with what has already been analysed and compared in detail, it's relevant to highlight the importance To look at yourself, being safe and making sure you will be not a victim of one of those dramatic events that still happen every day, around us.
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