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Some people think that it is good for younger people to make their own decisions. Others feel that these decisions should be made with the help of their parents. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #decisions #help #parents
It is undeniable that
parents
 will have much more experience in every aspect of life as compared to their children. But
this
 is
also
 true that everyone has their own journey
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 life which only they can feel and understand.
Therefore
, it may vary from relation to relation one
shares
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 with
parents
 and situation to situation. Both
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scenarios will be discussed in
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further
.  Most
of
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the
parents
 want best for their children. I feel one should be able to discuss what they are thinking to do with their
parents
 and have their feedback, and should be open for a discussion in a very friendly manner between both
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parties. It creates a sense of trust between them.
However
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 if
parents
 are forcefully trying to impose something they think
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may be right can become a problem. It is very important for the kid to be equally involved and heard
otherwise
 they may never share anything in future. In
todays
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 day and age with easy access to friends and strangers all the time there has been a barrier between families. Sometimes they do not even see each other for one or more days.  In my
opinion
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 there should be a balance between
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two,
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listening and suggesting. Because forceful intervention can lead to heavy consequences in the longer run.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • self-reliance
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • confidence
  • empowered
  • consequences
  • mistakes
  • experience
  • guidance
  • wisdom
  • safety net
  • security
  • informed decisions
  • balance
  • autonomy
  • support
  • pitfalls
  • challenges
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