The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates current health
expenditure
totals as proportions of GDP for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012 for several European countries (Belgium, Denmark, Estonia, France, Lithuania, Luxembourg, Netherlands, Norway, Poland, Slovenia, Spain and Switzerland.
Firstly
,
Switzerland
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Switzerland's
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usage of gross domestic
products
was the highest
between
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among
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all European countries,
almost
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at almost
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11%. Followed by Belgium,
expenditure
of gross domestic
products
were
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at 10% between the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
Secondly
, Estonia was the lowest country to use these domestic
products
, at 3%.
Moreover
, what comes after Belgium is Spain at 8% of health
expenditure
of gross domestic
products
. But for France, the highest year to use these
products
was
in
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2007.
In addition
, Lithuania comes before Estonia
for
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the
least
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last
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country to use gross domestic
products
.
Overall
, Norway and
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the Netherlands
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Netherlands
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Netherlands'
Netherland's
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expenditure
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expenditures
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of gross domestic
products
were almost the same between the years 2002, 2007 and 2012,
as well as
for Slovenia.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • expenditure
  • percentage
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • comparison
  • notable
  • pattern
  • exceptional
  • deviation
  • neighbouring countries
  • economic policies
  • public health
  • data analysis
  • statistical comparison
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