Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In the 21st century, most manufacturers' products have a high level of

sugar

, which can cause health issues. There is an argument among some masses, that sugary product should be more expensive, which prevent people to purchase sugary foods.

While

I agree with

this

idea,

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I'm not totally consented with it in some aspects. First of all, in recent decades most folk have been suffering

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diabetes,

thus

It's significantly important to find a solution

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this

issue.

In addition

, consuming sugary foods can have a detrimental impact on anybody's teeth,

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consequently

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It could cause lots of problems during the elderly period.

Furthermore

, using

sugar

in routine cuisine has a central role in obesity, which has become a worldwide problem nowadays and lots of people all over the world have suffered from it.

On the other hand

, most

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the

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foods are made

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sugar

, so we need substitutes for them, which can be a challenge. Sometimes consuming

sugar

don't

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have a simple impact,

For example

, research done by German scientists has shown that fattening by

sugar

dramatically depends on an individual's genes,

thus

it does not affect everyone in the same way. Another facet of enhancing the price of

sugar

that I like to mention is economical inflation, which raises another issue

subsequently

. In conclusion,

while

the increase in

sugar

prices has consequences, I agree with the idea, because the community's health is more important than anything else, so governments should take steps to solve

this

issue in some ways that people's health can be preserved.