The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table graph gives the proportion of cell phone owners using various cell phone features in 2006, 2008 and 2010.
Overall
, it can seem that three years graph compare seven features that make calls, take a photo, send&receive text message, play games, search the internet, play music and record video.Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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